Hilarious title aside - and, let's face it, it is quite lulzy - this really is a pretty good story. Considering the length of it (and my ever lasting "no space for development" issues), it has a lot of emotions packed up in a small space. It's not just hot sex-some more sex-happy ever after kind, and thus it feels more... human, let's say.Not that there's anything wrong with the sex part. It's hot. Kinky. BDSM. But, there's something a little extra to it.Not quite a four star thing, but still...